Hurricane paragraph writing.

When there is a large body of ocean that is above the temperature of 26.5°C, a fierce storm forms, which may be a hurricane. Significantly, the very warm temperature of the ocean is what’s needed to start it. When it is over the sea or on coastal towns it is very lethal but as it advances inland it diminishes because the fuel is the tropical oceans. Storm surges, inland flooding and severe winds (up to 270 kph) are the more critical outcomes of the fatal storm. Destroyed buildings, devastated businesses, casualties, and a large loss of jobs could be the result of a hurricane

We are learning to write informational paragraphs in a more complex way. In ways we should in NCEA level 1. This should help us for next year with exams. We are using different types of sentence starters to make it more interesting and less bland.